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posted by [personal profile] sgflutegirl at 05:43pm on 15/08/2011 under ,
Have seen this around my f-list and figured it would be fun.

Give me a link to one of my fics or WIPs, and I'll give you details that didn't make it into the fic. Background canon, deleted scenes, or a look into the future. My choice, but if you have a specific question you can ask it in your request.

As long as you can give me the title or description of the fic, I don't need a link.
location: In front of the TV
Mood:: 'sore' sore
Music:: NBC Nightly News
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posted by [identity profile] ciaimpala.livejournal.com at 10:59pm on 15/08/2011
Ooo very cool! I will have to steal this one too at some point ;)

I pick...A Day Full of Firsts :)
 
posted by [identity profile] sgflutegirl.livejournal.com at 11:50pm on 15/08/2011
Well, I had originally planned to go into more detail, as far as Steve's time in the hospital. Like what happened those few days he was really sick, and when they were trying to convince the doctors to let Danny stay with him. I decided to focus more on the homecoming instead.
I'd also planned to have a scene with Grace visiting him in the hospital, but I couldn't figure out how to fit it in, so it never got written.

As far as the future, Steve won't be going back to work right away, as he still has some rehab to do. I can also imagine Steve keeping his scars as they are. In Burning For You, Danny mentioned that it was his second favorite tattoo (on the shoulder that was burned). I'd like to think that Steve might see about getting it fixed or something. Not really sure what kind of damage would be done because of the burns, and what it would take to fix it.
 
posted by [identity profile] ciaimpala.livejournal.com at 11:52pm on 15/08/2011
Those are great details!!!
 
posted by [identity profile] ranereins.livejournal.com at 01:37am on 16/08/2011
*EG* I Think I Broke It
 
posted by [identity profile] sgflutegirl.livejournal.com at 01:55am on 16/08/2011
Well, you know the background, but for other: I screwed up my toe a few days ago, and this bunny attacked me and I had to write it. LOL

I had thought about putting in something to the effect that Steve was trying to distract DAnny from the pain, and Danny didn't realize it, but I couldn't figure out a good way to do it from Danny's POV, so it didn't get written.

So, they go to the doctor, and it turns out that he did in fact break his toe. There isn't much that can be done, other than buddy taping it and staying off it. So Steve takes him back to his place. I can see Danny complaining the whole time, but really he likes the fact that Steve is waiting on him hand and foot. LOL

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